Tuesday, September 18, 2018

When He Spoke Those Words


When He Spoke Those Words
On the Face value
They were Just words
Made up of Alphabets
To be “pronounced”
I Love You
But
When He Spoke Those Words
Having Them from Him
Spoken with passion
Made her wild & Ecstatic
Within Fraction of Seconds
Everything Paused
Her World Changed
And She Danced
Tuned To the Melody Of Her Heart…..


- Tina Acharya 
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70 comments:

  1. Well penned poem. Emotions in every word. 2

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  2. Beautifully captured the emotion of love :)

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  3. True! Words make sense only when they are meant...

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  4. Beautifully written emotional and romantic.

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  5. wowowww!! amazing #Viddhreads #MyfriendAlexa

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  6. #poseinstylereads #myfriendalexa
    keep writing the wonderful poetry

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  7. A beautiful poem. The emotions are so well expressed

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  8. Nice poem. It is more how he spoke than when he spoke, it seems

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  9. Nice poem. I love you are mere 3 words, but when spoken with honest intentions and passion, they can certainly change a person's life.

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  10. Aww this so cute. The lovely illustration makes it even more beautiful.

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  11. Nicely written poem. I was transported to another world reading it!

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  12. Beautiful! Reminded of my early romance days with my lover, now husband :) #surreads #myfriendalexa #blogchatter
    Cheers,
    Surbhi from www.prettymummasays.com

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  13. Sweet poem. Beautifully expressed.
    #MyFriendAlexa #ContemplationOfaJoker #Jokerophilia

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  14. lovely poem. loved the illustrations. keep writing :)

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  15. Lovely little poem describing the profound meaning the rather mundane words 'I love you' hold for a man or woman in love for the first time. The words may be common place but they hold a wealth of meaning when we hear them and know they are meant for us and us alone. Makes you feel you are the centrr of the universe when it comes from someone you love...

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  16. Tina you beautifully described the change in world after those 3 words are said out. Cute poem.

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  17. this is so beautiful, Nicely penned.. Keep it up!!

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  18. Love changes everything. It is the most powerful thing in the world. Lovely poem.

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  19. beautiful Poetry.. the three words can make a difference and who says those three words matters more!

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  20. Words are mere text and these text makes no sense when we have not set some context, and this is like the talk without the blend of emotions are much like the bland food. Lovely little thoughts but leaves a lasting impression.

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  21. nice short and sweet poem and not to forget ... this reflects true love...#MyFriendAlexa

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  22. Lovely poem but it makes me feel sad....my husband adored me. He didn't know how to make small talk in english and never said these three words. I kept waiting but then he passed away suddenly making me feel lost. #wordsmthkaurreads

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  23. Those 3 words are mere words spoken by millions before us and probably many more millions after us...but for each its a unique experience to hear it from that special person. Expressed it so well.

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  24. wow you had written it so beautifully. loved it. #surbhireads

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  25. Hey Tina , I am not much of a poetic or romantic person and still felt the strength of your genuine emotions . #MyFriendAlexa #SujatawdeReads

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  26. Loved the poem. I love you can actually change your life.

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  27. Wow, so nice to read such a sweet poem!

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  28. They maybe just three words but they unleash a whirlwind of amazing emotions. You have expressed beautifully in the poem.

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  29. Nice poem! I like the romantic tone and wordings.

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  30. Lovely. You expressed the feeling of love so beautifully

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  31. Words can be so effective when spoken with true passion. Else they remain just words! A wonderful poem, Tina!
    #DeepTiesReads #MyFriendAlexa

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  32. There is always a difference when people say something when they mean it from the bottom of the heart and when they say something peripherally. The best example is the way people comment on our blogs from 'my friend Alexa'. See what I did there? ;) You always know when a comment is genuine.

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  33. Beautiful play of words. These three words I love you are so powerful. It can completely change a person's life.

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  34. True, anyone can say I love you, very few can show it via gestures.

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  35. Lovely words. Yes, falling in love does make simplest of things special and memorable.

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  36. Very sweet and simple poem. Loved the rhyming.

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  37. Very heartfelt poetry.


    Cheers
    MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
    #MyFriendAlexa #MeenalSonalReads

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  38. Words become melody when said with love and honesty

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  39. Heart-warming piece of art!! I can never write poems.. you are too good!!

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  40. Beautiful creation. Loved the lines. Simple but heart touching.
    #readbypreetispanorama

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  41. Lovely poem. I loved the way you described passion and feelings. Keep writing such stuff.

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  42. What a beautiful poem written and very well expressed.

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  43. These three words are not new of anyone of us but they are special in their own way for every single person.

    #MothersGurukulreads #Myfriendalexa

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  44. Lovely poem, and so true. The words are in nothing, it's the feeling that matters.

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  45. Nice write up. Ofcourse, those 3 words spoken with real love and passion are wonderful.

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  46. Beautiful choice of words to express how beautiful these three words are.

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  47. I know when someone speaks the same lines only for you, it takes the whole world to realise that he actually means it.

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