When He
Spoke Those Words
On the
Face value
They were
Just words
Made up of
Alphabets
To be “pronounced”
I Love You
But
When He
Spoke Those Words
Having Them
from Him
Spoken
with passion
Made her wild
& Ecstatic
Within
Fraction of Seconds
Everything
Paused
Her World
Changed
And She Danced
Tuned To
the Melody Of Her Heart…..
- Tina Acharya
- Tina Acharya
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Nice Poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sir :)
DeleteWell penned poem. Emotions in every word. 2
ReplyDeleteThank You Sooo Much :)
DeleteHeart-warming poem
ReplyDeleteBeautifully captured the emotion of love :)
ReplyDeleteTrue! Words make sense only when they are meant...
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written emotional and romantic.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed emotions.
ReplyDeletewowowww!! amazing #Viddhreads #MyfriendAlexa
ReplyDeletenice poetry. keep writing
ReplyDelete#poseinstylereads #myfriendalexa
ReplyDeletekeep writing the wonderful poetry
Beautiful
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem. The emotions are so well expressed
ReplyDeleteNice poem. It is more how he spoke than when he spoke, it seems
ReplyDeleteNice poem. I love you are mere 3 words, but when spoken with honest intentions and passion, they can certainly change a person's life.
ReplyDeleteAww this so cute. The lovely illustration makes it even more beautiful.
ReplyDeleteNicely written poem. I was transported to another world reading it!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Short and sweet
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Reminded of my early romance days with my lover, now husband :) #surreads #myfriendalexa #blogchatter
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Surbhi from www.prettymummasays.com
Sweet poem. Beautifully expressed.
ReplyDelete#MyFriendAlexa #ContemplationOfaJoker #Jokerophilia
lovely poem. loved the illustrations. keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteLovely little poem describing the profound meaning the rather mundane words 'I love you' hold for a man or woman in love for the first time. The words may be common place but they hold a wealth of meaning when we hear them and know they are meant for us and us alone. Makes you feel you are the centrr of the universe when it comes from someone you love...
ReplyDeleteTina you beautifully described the change in world after those 3 words are said out. Cute poem.
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful, Nicely penned.. Keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteSuch poignant lines!
ReplyDeleteLove changes everything. It is the most powerful thing in the world. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteNice poem..
ReplyDeletebeautiful Poetry.. the three words can make a difference and who says those three words matters more!
ReplyDeletebeautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteSuch amazing words to describe love!
ReplyDeleteWords are mere text and these text makes no sense when we have not set some context, and this is like the talk without the blend of emotions are much like the bland food. Lovely little thoughts but leaves a lasting impression.
ReplyDeleteThat was so cute!
ReplyDeletenice short and sweet poem and not to forget ... this reflects true love...#MyFriendAlexa
ReplyDeleteLovely poem but it makes me feel sad....my husband adored me. He didn't know how to make small talk in english and never said these three words. I kept waiting but then he passed away suddenly making me feel lost. #wordsmthkaurreads
ReplyDeleteThose 3 words are mere words spoken by millions before us and probably many more millions after us...but for each its a unique experience to hear it from that special person. Expressed it so well.
ReplyDeletewow you had written it so beautifully. loved it. #surbhireads
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteHey Tina , I am not much of a poetic or romantic person and still felt the strength of your genuine emotions . #MyFriendAlexa #SujatawdeReads
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem. I love you can actually change your life.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteWow, so nice to read such a sweet poem!
ReplyDeleteThey maybe just three words but they unleash a whirlwind of amazing emotions. You have expressed beautifully in the poem.
ReplyDeleteNice poem! I like the romantic tone and wordings.
ReplyDeleteLovely. You expressed the feeling of love so beautifully
ReplyDeleteWords can be so effective when spoken with true passion. Else they remain just words! A wonderful poem, Tina!
ReplyDelete#DeepTiesReads #MyFriendAlexa
There is always a difference when people say something when they mean it from the bottom of the heart and when they say something peripherally. The best example is the way people comment on our blogs from 'my friend Alexa'. See what I did there? ;) You always know when a comment is genuine.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful play of words. These three words I love you are so powerful. It can completely change a person's life.
ReplyDeleteso so so beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOh my! This is such a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteTrue, anyone can say I love you, very few can show it via gestures.
ReplyDeleteLovely words. Yes, falling in love does make simplest of things special and memorable.
ReplyDeleteRomantic to the core 😊
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and simple poem. Loved the rhyming.
ReplyDeleteVery heartfelt poetry.
ReplyDeleteCheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
#MyFriendAlexa #MeenalSonalReads
Words become melody when said with love and honesty
ReplyDeleteHeart-warming piece of art!! I can never write poems.. you are too good!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful creation. Loved the lines. Simple but heart touching.
ReplyDelete#readbypreetispanorama
Lovely poem. I loved the way you described passion and feelings. Keep writing such stuff.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem written and very well expressed.
ReplyDeleteThese three words are not new of anyone of us but they are special in their own way for every single person.
ReplyDelete#MothersGurukulreads #Myfriendalexa
Lovely poem, and so true. The words are in nothing, it's the feeling that matters.
ReplyDeleteNice write up. Ofcourse, those 3 words spoken with real love and passion are wonderful.
ReplyDeleteloved it. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful choice of words to express how beautiful these three words are.
ReplyDeleteThank You Tamanna :)
DeleteBeautiful poem
ReplyDeleteThank You Priyal :)
DeleteWonderful poem. Keep writing .
ReplyDeleteI know when someone speaks the same lines only for you, it takes the whole world to realise that he actually means it.
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